new song...

I've been working these lyrics around in my head for a few days, I still need a 2nd verse but here goes so far.

verse
how, did you get yourself into this mess and
why, are you giving in to the darkness and
when, will you give it all a rest, give it a rest

what, ever happened to just keeping your chin up
when did you become the type
to give barely enough
you're giving barely enough
i think you're giving up

chorus
you're slowly going under
and all i can do is sit & wait
i thought you would fight so much harder
and i'm beginning to lose a little faith

bridge
there's only so much
you can blame on your past
why don't you pick yourself up
dust yourself off
and take your life into your own two hands

chorus
cause you're slowly going under
and all i can do is sit & wait
i thought you would fight so much harder
and i'm beginning to lose a little faith
i'm beginning to lose a little faith